Friday, February 18, 2011

Chapter 4

"Where is Duane, Danny?" asked Solar with a feared face without looking at Danny. Danny gulped.
Danny finally said, "He ran away." Solar took a big breath in.
"And you let him," said Solar furiously. He clenched his fist.
"Of course I ran behind as fast as I could, but he hid somewhere. He's so little......," said Danny with a glum face. Solar interrupted him.
"So you came back and left him in that big town?" asked Solar losing his calmness. Solar looked at Danny. Danny stayed silent. Everyone looked down.
"He is very small, so he must have got hungry and stopped. If we spread out we can cover more space," said Harry encouragingly.
"I'm sorry but I can't afford to lose anymore of my children," said Solar sadly.
"How about you stay and I go to find what's his name?" offered Harry.
"I couldn't possibly cause you much trouble. Duane is my child and you shouldn't take part in this because you have given me enough," said Solar politely. 
"It's the least I could do after finding your children in my house, please my good friend Solar I can't possibly take the guilt out of myself," said Harry.
"OK, Harry you may help, but there is one problem," said Solar.
"And what is that?" asked Harry thoughtfully.
"We can't leave them alone again," said Solar.
"But dad this is Duane we're talking about," said Danny.
"Harry, can you stay here with my children?" asked Solar. Harry awkwardly smiled.
"OK, but I have to bring Megan here because today it's my turn in something," said Harry. Everybody shook their head.
"Sure you can," said Solar nervously. The kids all groaned. Harry went into his car and drove.
Meanwhile Duane was in paradise. He finally woke up. He saw the woman looking at him. He pushed himself to the end of the bed.
"Is there something wrong?" asked the woman with a sad face. Duane remained silent and stared at her. The woman went out and came back with a bowl of cereal. She handed it to him. Duane was so hungry he couldn't say no. He took it and started eating. The woman smiled.
"You know you don't have to be afraid," said the woman. Duane finished the bowl of cereal and wiped his mouth. He put it down on the table next to him. He smiled.
"Thank you," said Duane.
"You are most welcome, now lets go," said the woman. They went to the bathroom. The woman brushed his teeth and made him take a shower. Duane has never felt so clean. She gave him some new clothes. Duane was so happy.
"So do you have a family?" asked the woman shyly.
"Yes, but I ran away," answered Duane.
"Why?" asked the woman.
"It's a long story, so can you tell me your name?" said Duane.
"Not after you," said the woman.
"Oh, my name is Duane," said Duane.
"Don't you have a nickname?" asked the woman.
"Sometimes my brother calls me little D because his name start with a D. My sisters and other brother call me sky. I have no idea why," said Duane.
"How many sisters do you have?" asked the woman.
"Four," replied Duane.
"You are one big family, so what are their names?" asked the woman.
"My father's name is Solar. I don't know what my mom's name is because I never ask. My big brother's name is Danny, he is 15 years old. My sisters name's are Samantha, she is 14 years old; Miral, she is 13; and Star is 12 years old. Then we have twins, Moon and Sun, they are 10 years old. Then there is me and I am 9 years old," said Duane.
"Oh nice, so do you know where you live because your family must be very worried about you," said the woman. Duane frowned.
"No, I don't. I do know that we live next to a place where people would never come," said Duane.
"Hmm, how about I drive and if you see your house tell me, OK," said the woman.
"OK,"  said Duane.




Will Duane find his home? Will Megan be too much? Will Solar go out for nothing?

Sunday, February 13, 2011

Mona

The worst character in the show. Ladies and gentlemen Mona.
Mona: "I heard that!"
Ahem, so anyway she has one daughter as you know. She loves money more than anything in the world. She is also very cheap. Opposite of Harry completely. She has short brown hair, dark green eyes, a big nose, very short, a bit tubby. She is known for taking advantage of the weak. She hates Harry, but she married him because of his money. She wears a big red dress. She thinks of Megan as a mini version of her. She doesn't have any friends, the reason is clear. She has two sisters and a brother. They live in another country with their mom and dad. When Mona was a kid she was very cute, but she changed.
Now here's our interview:
I: Hello Mona
M: Hello
I: So Mona tell us about yourself.
M: I m a rich woman with a lovely daughter and a husband.
I: So, if you found a poor person begging, would you give them money.
M: Is this a mockery? I would never give them a penny
I: Oh I see. Have you ever put yourself in their shoes?
M: OK, that's it!
(runs after interviewer)
Poor interviewer.
Anyway If you have any questions post them down.

Wednesday, February 9, 2011

Chapter 3

Duane kept on running till he couldn't anymore. He stopped at town, but he doesn't know it was the town because he never heard of it.
He questioned, "Where am I?" People looked at him poorly, because of his clothes. Then a woman came a picked him up and went to her car. Duane still hasn't recovered from the shock. The woman looked at him thoughtfully. She drove to her house. Then she picked up him up and put him inside. She wrapped a blanket around him. She put her hand on his forehead. It was cold. She thought that he might be sick. Then she put him on a very comfy bed and went to sleep.
Finally Solar arrived at Mona's house. He knocked the door. Harry came and opened the door. He looked confused.
"Hi, my name is Solar," said Solar politely.
"Hello, nice to meet you Solar, I'm Harry," said Harry. He told him to come in. So they went inside. Mona gasped when she saw Solar talking to Harry. Harry heard her.
"Why are you standing there? Come meet this nice man," said Harry. Mona looked at Solar angrily when Harry turned back to Solar. Mona came in and headed to Solar, he stood up and handed out his hand. Mona looked disgusted.
She suddenly said, "I need to go, bye stranger I never met before."
Solar smiled and said, "Nice meeting you too." Mona went outside to buy some groceries, she called Megan to come too.
Solar said, "May you show me around your house please?"
"I'm not sure. Well, because you don't go into people's houses and expect them to show you around. But I think I can trust you," said Harry with a smile. They went around and then they finally went to the basement. Harry opened the door. They went inside.
Danny sat outside all alone, thinking. Sam saw him and sighed. She went outside.
"What are you doing? Come inside," said Sam.
"Go back inside!" exclaimed Danny. She sat beside him and pushed her hair out of her eyes. She looked at the ground and picked up a stick. She shook her head.
"Danny, what are you doing?" she said in a soft voice. Danny sighed then pushed her.
Sam stood up shouted, "What was that for?"
"For not going inside." said Danny. Sam put her hand on her hip.
"You see Danny, this is why. You never treat us like people. I am your sister. I can help you," said Sam. Danny stood up and looked at her. He went inside. Sam sighed and shook her head.
"Now I don't want anyone of you putting their foot near outside," said Danny.
"Why?" questioned Sun.
Danny said, "Why? Why? Do you think this is a joke? That we are playing games?"
"I said why?" said Sun angry.
Solar and Harry opened the door and saw big lumps wrapped in a blanket. Harry wanted what was in them. So he unwrapped them and saw Miral and Star. He was shocked.
"My girls!" shouted Solar. Harry looked at him in shock. Solar nudged them. They woke up.
"Dad, you came!" exclaimed Miral. Solar was so happy.
"I-I-I'm so sorry, I didn't know anything about this," stammered Harry nervously.
"I know," said Solar. Harry put his hand on his forehead.
"Can't we go home now?" asked Miral.
Harry said, "If you knew all along why didn't you say anything?
"Somethings don't need to be mentioned in this world, goodbye now," said Solar.
Harry said, "Come back soon." He walked them to the door. They walked out.
"Stop, I thought you had a car. No, no, no this won't do, you must be driven by me," offered Harry.
Solar said, "No it's fine we can walk."
"Tisk, tisk, tisk. Now come in the car, it's the least I could do," said Harry. Then he pushed them in, but not too hard. Solar wanted to say that's it's fine but Harry wouldn't let him. They drove home. Solar showed the way. When they arrived Harry looked at their house disgusted.
"Not to be rude but, is this your house?" asked Harry.
Solar said, "Um, yes. We are planning on buying things soon."
"Six kids, is the charm," said Harry.
"Actually we are seven, unless you count Moon and Sun as one," said Star.
"Pardon me, but I only see six counting individually," said Harry.
"Where's Duane?" asked Solar without counting. Moon, Sun and Sam looked at Danny. Danny scratched his head.


Solar knows Duane's gone. Just when he thinks it's all over. What's up with all his children missing?

Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Harry's character

Harry is Mona's husband, and Megan's father. He really isn't involved in the story. But has major parts when he is in a scene. He has no idea that Mona tortures any kids. Harry is really nice just like Solar. Megan acts around him really nicely, because she wants him to buy her everything she wants. Harry doesn't like mean or cruel people. So if he figures out what his wife and daughter are up to then........
Harry can get really mad and could do anything in his possibilities, so don't make him mad. He always says that his daughter is very weird. Mona doesn't like Harry's nice personality, but she hates his bad side even more. Harry loves the word Happiness. So he uses it a lot.
His favorite color is green.




If you have any questions feel free to ask.

Sunday, February 6, 2011

Megan's character

I recently posted characters, but I haven't gave enough info about them. So I decided to tell you them one on one. Starting with the meanest child.

Megan Mach
Megan as you know is Mona's and Harry's daughter. She knows about her mom torturing the Galaxy kids (That's their last name). So she decided to join her. What fun torturing people. that's what she thinks since she isn't the one tortured. She is 11 years old. She has a very cool, awesome room. It has a wide flat screen T.V attached to her wall, a computer, a laptop, a big stereo, a fluffy, soft, comfy bed, 10 personal servants, a game room... etc.

What else would an 11 year old want?

She is afraid that her mom could have another baby and forget about her and not spoil her. Also being poor.
Megan has a very big secret that only Sam and best friend know, Sam won't tell it to anyone because she's afraid of that thing in the secret herself. Megan knows about Sam knowing the secret but tries to stay away from her. The Galaxy kids call her Meany and have a catch phrase. Duane says that her real name is mean with a g in the middle representing good at being mean.

She has one similar friend. They are so close Megan told her secret. Her name is Emma. She's rich too of course, or is she?

If you want to know more comment below.

Saturday, February 5, 2011

Chapter 2

Star and Miral woke up and saw themselves in a cage in a dark room. They heard footsteps approaching and people taking. Mona and Megan came in.
Mona said, "Good morning. How are you? Hungry? Comfy?"
Megan continued, "Pathetic?"
Miral shouted, "Let us out of here now!"
Mona said, "Temper, temper child. I bet this is better than living in a dump" Miral looked angrily at her with her shiny blue eyes.
Star said, "Please let us out we can't stay here."
Megan said, "Aw look who decided too speak up." Miral looked at Megan.
Miral yelled, "Nobody asked you!"
Mona said, "You shall talk to my daughter in a respectful tone young lady."
Miral said, "Yeah right." Star started kicking the bars of the cage.
Megan said, "Kick as you wish but you will hurt yourself only."
"The only thing that hurts is our ears from you blabbing!" shouted Miral.
Meanwhile at home things weren't so juicy either.
Solar said, "Oh, no this isn't happening Danny go find your sisters."
"I'm on it dad," said Danny as he headed to the door.
"I knew this was a bad idea," thought Solar.
"Dad, maybe they went to Mona's house, unwillingly of course!" shouted Moon. Solar stood up and looked at Moon. He wore an old sweatshirt he had and headed to the door.
"Wait dad," shouted Duane "We can't stay alone, what if Mona didn't take them and then she came to do something to us?" Samantha looked sarcastically at Duane.
"Danny will come back in a few minutes, until then you should stay here with Samantha in charge. Listen to her and I'll be back after a while. Okay?" said Solar. Sam laughed nervously. Moon lied down to the cold surface looking down.
Sam said, "We'll be fine dad you go fine our sisters." Solar smiled.
"I knew I could count on you," said Solar. He kissed Sam on her head and went out.
After a while Danny came, he asked, "Did you find them yet?" The four of them looked at him.
"Since when do you care about us?" questioned Duane.
"What does that mean?" asked Danny.
Sam said, "Nothing, just nothing." Then she looked down to the floor. Danny shook his head with a pathetic look on his face.
"Where's dad?" asked Danny.
Moon said, "He went to Mona's house to find them."
"It's getting late get some sleep," said Danny.
Duane yelled, "I don't wanna go to sleep, I'm waiting for dad."
Danny sighed and shouted, "Go to sleep Duane!"
"I don't want to!" exclaimed Duane.
"Just go to sleep Duane," said Sam. Duane stood up and looked at Danny and Sam. He looked at them pathetically.
Duane said, "You don't even care about dad, or Miral." he looked at Sun and continued, "Or Star, you only care about yourselves," he shouted, "You're selfish these are your sisters and your dad, and you don't seem to care a single bit...."
Danny interrupted, "Do you think we can do something and we don't want to, this isn't about us, it isn't about anyone, it's about Miral and Star and dad coming back safely. If you stay up will that help them come back? Is that what you think?"
Duane said, "Just forget it. I don't wanna talk now." He wore Danny's old jacket and went out.
Danny followed him and yelled, "Duane, come here right now!" Duane looked at him then he turned his back. Danny followed him, but Duane was already gone.
"What have I done?" whispered Danny. He fell on his knees and hands and looked down.



Oh no, double trouble. Duane, Star, Miral and Solar all gone. Will they be able to find them? Is Duane coming back. Who knows?